Dont shoot anything until the last 3 seconds, then blast utter hell outta 'em.

I got
52,866 lbs.

I feel like a true pilgrim!
[Funny that since I'm Scottish. . . hmm. . .]

In any case, this is a mildly entertaining way to kill some time.

You had a halfway decent storyline but i could hardly follow it, heres a list of all I found wrong with this move:

No preloader, for a 9.9mb flash you really should use a preloader, and newgrounds offers them for free

All sprites were in jpeg format, this is a big no-no in sprite movies, use .bmp or .png formats

Text was nearly impossible to read, make your text clearer next time

Animations were extremely choppy, it looked like it was made with windows movie maker

Story was hard to follow, all I got was Sonic went Super Sonic, then lost his power, Knuckles made him super again, then Mecha Sonic went into a container beside the Master Emerald [which you mistakenly said Green Chaos Emerald], then tails getting knocked out by super Mecha sonic and the same happening to Knuckles, then Super Sonic found a goal ring which exploded, then somehting about Super Mecha sonic draining Super SOnics power to kill him. A very confusing storyline

Endless loop, the movie loops endlessly

Most animations stop when characters speak, people generally dont freeze when talking

Different style of backgrounds, you keep switching between sprite backgrouds and photographs, keep it sprites or photographs but dont switch between them

Opening eyes part, sry but that was very poorly done, and the bars kept moving at the start which did not help at all

Overall, I give a 2 for effort, but these sort of movies are for Youtube, not Newgrounds

Day 50 and i'm sitting pretty with $1,755,578,696 and i rejected both deals i was offered

You said it was harder to make money, I found it easier, all you have to do is just keep buying more stores and the money floods in :/

And as for the 10,000 free bank money, you should fix that, you can use it as many times as you want as long as you have less than $5,000

Besides, remove the deals and the bank thing and this is almost exactly the same as the last verion

Next time, either readically improve or move on, this aint going anywhere

Hopefully this'll keep me motivated enough to finish the flash i'm making

The only problem i find is that the ending to to abrupt, a nice fadeout or something similar wold make this epic. but hey, nothing perfect

but it lacks the punch i think it should have, sounds a bit basic

if you ever plan to remake this try to make the guitar notes fow smoother into one another and make them just a bit more hardcore

it's a great start, but kinda feels unfinished :/

it's a very good remix, but, idk, it sort of lacks the punch the original had

the original is the type that is designed to make you want to get up and dance, this is more of a background music, especially from 2:33 onwards, and in places it reminds me of carnival music, which is a definate downer for me

and the vocals are really what make the song what it is, i can respect why you never added them, but all the same, not the best choice you could have made

all in all, a nice remix, but i dont know if it's better or even equal to the original, sorry

4 / 5 for effort
7 / 10 for reasons stated above

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