Score: 8

"If you want a true Pilgrim's score. . ."

submission: This is Why You're Fat

date: December 2, 2009

Dont shoot anything until the last 3 seconds, then blast utter hell outta 'em.

I got
52,866 lbs.

I feel like a true pilgrim!
[Funny that since I'm Scottish. . . hmm. . .]

In any case, this is a mildly entertaining way to kill some time.

Score: 2

"It didn't cut it"

submission: Mecha Sonic's Wrath

date: July 10, 2009

You had a halfway decent storyline but i could hardly follow it, heres a list of all I found wrong with this move:

No preloader, for a 9.9mb flash you really should use a preloader, and newgrounds offers them for free

All sprites were in jpeg format, this is a big no-no in sprite movies, use .bmp or .png formats

Text was nearly impossible to read, make your text clearer next time

Animations were extremely choppy, it looked like it was made with windows movie maker

Story was hard to follow, all I got was Sonic went Super Sonic, then lost his power, Knuckles made him super again, then Mecha Sonic went into a container beside the Master Emerald [which you mistakenly said Green Chaos Emerald], then tails getting knocked out by super Mecha sonic and the same happening to Knuckles, then Super Sonic found a goal ring which exploded, then somehting about Super Mecha sonic draining Super SOnics power to kill him. A very confusing storyline

Endless loop, the movie loops endlessly

Most animations stop when characters speak, people generally dont freeze when talking

Different style of backgrounds, you keep switching between sprite backgrouds and photographs, keep it sprites or photographs but dont switch between them

Opening eyes part, sry but that was very poorly done, and the bars kept moving at the start which did not help at all

Overall, I give a 2 for effort, but these sort of movies are for Youtube, not Newgrounds

Score: 4

"Flawed"

submission: Video Games Tycoon V1.1

date: July 4, 2009

Day 50 and i'm sitting pretty with $1,755,578,696 and i rejected both deals i was offered

You said it was harder to make money, I found it easier, all you have to do is just keep buying more stores and the money floods in :/

And as for the 10,000 free bank money, you should fix that, you can use it as many times as you want as long as you have less than $5,000

Besides, remove the deals and the bank thing and this is almost exactly the same as the last verion

Next time, either readically improve or move on, this aint going anywhere

Score: 10

"COFFEE FOR EVERYONE!"

submission: Awesome Cracks Down

date: June 12, 2009

Gotta love the Hang in There kitty poster though, that there completes this flash

Score: 10

"Woot for Shoutouts!"

submission: Shoutouts Act II

date: May 30, 2009

What I find endearing is how I'm mentioned twice =3

I voted 5 [the potato scared me into doing so]

Score: 8

"movie had some good points"

submission: Sonic Shorts: Volume 5

date: March 2, 2009

some of the shorts were just not funny though, but had an overall decent quality

end credit song was the wrong choice completely, and no amount of hand puppets can change that

to all who are busting their chops looking for the hidden Tailsdoll flash that you just know is there, click the fuzzy transition right after the second time sonic gets KO'ed by knuckles [sonic v'ing knux on the wii]

if you pause the movie just right theres a Tailsdoll image blended in with the gray fuzz [thats how i found it, i thought that transition looked strange]

anyway, overall good collection, nothing spectacularily amazing but not too dull either

Score: 10

"h3Y I7 d1dnt h4ev SN0IC 1N IT D:"

submission: Megaman vs Airman

date: January 27, 2009

lol i'm just kidding, very nice movie, honestly was not expecting that last life

i hope to see more movies like this =)

Score: 1

"not good at all"

submission: AS and Tweening TUT

date: November 24, 2008

this is the most useless tutorial i've ever seen, heres a list of whats wrong, hopefully you'll update:

there is only one music choice, which is off real bad quality, learn how to optimize your audio, you raped a perfectly great song by making it sound like it was recorded with a crap microphone

there is absolutely nothing stopping you from putting those text files for AS on the tutorial itself, forcing people to download seems dodgy, at the very least you could have explained what the AS you did put up actually did

basic tweening was a blowout, you knew your stuff when it came to making the tween, but you stopped there, nothing about when you cant shape tween, nothing about being unable to motion tween multiple objects at the same time, hell there wasn't even rotation! you could have at least said that you needed to use a different program to make that blur effect, expand it plz

and effect tweening epicly failed, the screen which the effect tween text was on was displayed for one frame before going to the AS oage for one frame then it went back to the beginning, i made a very precise screenie to see if what you actually had was good, what i got was utter bull, you only mentioned that it was POSSIBLE, and even then you only mentioned filters, what about tints? or alpha? hell even the brightness? and whats more you only said stuff that should have been in basic tweening. one last thing about this fail of a page on effect tweening original is not spelled opriginal, luckily the page disappears so fast people wont notice

and a good tut is not made of only 5 pages, a GOOD tut on AS and tweening could go on for 14 or more pages

look at a proper tutorial before making one yourself, who knows? you may learn something

i simply cannot believe this took 2 people to make

well, maybe you'll actually read this and make the changes to desperatly needed

Score: 10

"that was funny as hell"

submission: Tankmen Infinity

date: November 23, 2008

really was....

but that easter egg was freaky, real freaky.......

Score: 5

"not too exciting"

submission: Video Games Tycoon

date: October 9, 2008

this is good, but really only for the first few minutes, then it just gets boring clicking it all, and i'm a fan of tycoon games

however, there are a few problems with this game, i found two, if there are more then i've not found them but here's what needs fixing:

Purchasing of the Well Console, the amount deducted from the total is not $10,000, it's only around $2000

States Button: when people click this they'll think it has to do with the states of USA or something, this may be a misspelling of Stats

also, you should add a feuture so that you know what button your on, as people wil think the States button doesn't work

there is no help section, the help screen is nothing more than an input for a company name [which may be left blank]

and of course the mere fact that the game IS endless is also a bad thing, as people have no goals to shoot for in the game, and most people are too lazy to think of a goal of their own

also, there should be rival companies, and expenditures for tax, rent etc and a choice of music, you only used up 225.8 KB of space, the limit is more that 1000 times that amount, spread your wings a bit ;-)

all in all, this isn't a bad game, 3/5 from me