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[This is Why You're Fat]

If you want a true Pilgrim's score. . .

Dont shoot anything until the last 3 seconds, then blast utter hell outta 'em.

I got
52,866 lbs.

I feel like a true pilgrim!
[Funny that since I'm Scottish. . . hmm. . .]

In any case, this is a mildly entertaining way to kill some time.

[Video Games Tycoon V1.1]

Flawed

Day 50 and i'm sitting pretty with $1,755,578,696 and i rejected both deals i was offered

You said it was harder to make money, I found it easier, all you have to do is just keep buying more stores and the money floods in :/

And as for the 10,000 free bank money, you should fix that, you can use it as many times as you want as long as you have less than $5,000

Besides, remove the deals and the bank thing and this is almost exactly the same as the last verion

Next time, either readically improve or move on, this aint going anywhere

[AS and Tweening TUT]

not good at all

this is the most useless tutorial i've ever seen, heres a list of whats wrong, hopefully you'll update:

there is only one music choice, which is off real bad quality, learn how to optimize your audio, you raped a perfectly great song by making it sound like it was recorded with a crap microphone

there is absolutely nothing stopping you from putting those text files for AS on the tutorial itself, forcing people to download seems dodgy, at the very least you could have explained what the AS you did put up actually did

basic tweening was a blowout, you knew your stuff when it came to making the tween, but you stopped there, nothing about when you cant shape tween, nothing about being unable to motion tween multiple objects at the same time, hell there wasn't even rotation! you could have at least said that you needed to use a different program to make that blur effect, expand it plz

and effect tweening epicly failed, the screen which the effect tween text was on was displayed for one frame before going to the AS oage for one frame then it went back to the beginning, i made a very precise screenie to see if what you actually had was good, what i got was utter bull, you only mentioned that it was POSSIBLE, and even then you only mentioned filters, what about tints? or alpha? hell even the brightness? and whats more you only said stuff that should have been in basic tweening. one last thing about this fail of a page on effect tweening original is not spelled opriginal, luckily the page disappears so fast people wont notice

and a good tut is not made of only 5 pages, a GOOD tut on AS and tweening could go on for 14 or more pages

look at a proper tutorial before making one yourself, who knows? you may learn something

i simply cannot believe this took 2 people to make

well, maybe you'll actually read this and make the changes to desperatly needed

[Video Games Tycoon]

not too exciting

this is good, but really only for the first few minutes, then it just gets boring clicking it all, and i'm a fan of tycoon games

however, there are a few problems with this game, i found two, if there are more then i've not found them but here's what needs fixing:

Purchasing of the Well Console, the amount deducted from the total is not $10,000, it's only around $2000

States Button: when people click this they'll think it has to do with the states of USA or something, this may be a misspelling of Stats

also, you should add a feuture so that you know what button your on, as people wil think the States button doesn't work

there is no help section, the help screen is nothing more than an input for a company name [which may be left blank]

and of course the mere fact that the game IS endless is also a bad thing, as people have no goals to shoot for in the game, and most people are too lazy to think of a goal of their own

also, there should be rival companies, and expenditures for tax, rent etc and a choice of music, you only used up 225.8 KB of space, the limit is more that 1000 times that amount, spread your wings a bit ;-)

all in all, this isn't a bad game, 3/5 from me

MarioFlashMovies responds:

... Well... V2 maybe... Or another tycoon.

[Generic Video Game Quiz]

very well done

very nicely done inddeed, it's nice to have a quiz game that branches out on so many different types of questions

i dont know though, i know this wont help much but i did feel as though something was missing, but despite that this is a very good quiz game

i got an A, i suppose thats good?

i dont think your restart counter is working though, it said 0 when i restarted a couple of times, but i almost never saw it, you really should change the colour of the number, make it red or green or something that contrasts with blue

well done though

[Ragdoll Avalanche II]

heh

i would call 1576 dodged quite an achievement, or too much free time
hmm...

one problem with the game though, it gets boring after a while (i deliberately killed myself out of sher curiosity of what would happen, and to see how many i dodged)

[The Stupid Quiz!]

go back and fix

i got every question correct with 0 wrong aswers, yet it says that i needed one more to get a perfect score!!

please fix

and for some reason, the answer to 3 is 47??

[Random the randomist]

it's not bad

but not really finished, still a few glitches to fix and just a few things that should have been fouind when tested, in at least one level, the volume control disappears behind the objects, when the mushroom guy stands on a moving platform, he doesn't move with it, ends up sliding off if you dont move, there should be more selection of music (just one?) and when i jumped up beside a moving platform the guy somehow got trapped inside it, i ended up having to restart as he couldn't get back out and there were a couple of little spelling mistakes (like the "Thanks for PLaying", it shouldn't have a capitol L) and shuold really have colour, greyscale makes it look depressing, like one of those games you play when you SERIOUSLY have ABSOLUTELY nothing better to do

apart from that, it is potentially good "pass the time" game, just fix those few problems and your good to go!

MrRandomist responds:

Thanks for your review i will have a new RtheR engine soon so i can iron out everyone of those glitches thanks for your review

[Final Fantasy Sonic X:Ep6]

i'l quote shadow form sonic heroes

"Perfect as always!"
oh, a tip for fighting aeon in hard mode
3 gigabreaks while aeon is weak should end the fight
use dark power at start (i survived with 7 HP), use GB, use Dark Power, heal use def break, use GB, use Dark power, heal, use def break or dark power then finish the fight with GB, easy!

i look foward to your next submissions, and as for the help with drawing, use the game "How to draw Sonic" the second edition is better
hope this helps!

[Whack Your Boss]

i prefered the other version

the other version had about 14 different ways to pwn the boss, including shoving him through the window

i think i saw it on heavygames.com at the bottom of the page, right hand side

oh, dont bother seeing how long you last listening to the guy, the worker automatically attacks the boss after he say's "what? you want a raise?" then the worker attacks the boss with the stapler