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It didn't cut it

You had a halfway decent storyline but i could hardly follow it, heres a list of all I found wrong with this move:

No preloader, for a 9.9mb flash you really should use a preloader, and newgrounds offers them for free

All sprites were in jpeg format, this is a big no-no in sprite movies, use .bmp or .png formats

Text was nearly impossible to read, make your text clearer next time

Animations were extremely choppy, it looked like it was made with windows movie maker

Story was hard to follow, all I got was Sonic went Super Sonic, then lost his power, Knuckles made him super again, then Mecha Sonic went into a container beside the Master Emerald [which you mistakenly said Green Chaos Emerald], then tails getting knocked out by super Mecha sonic and the same happening to Knuckles, then Super Sonic found a goal ring which exploded, then somehting about Super Mecha sonic draining Super SOnics power to kill him. A very confusing storyline

Endless loop, the movie loops endlessly

Most animations stop when characters speak, people generally dont freeze when talking

Different style of backgrounds, you keep switching between sprite backgrouds and photographs, keep it sprites or photographs but dont switch between them

Opening eyes part, sry but that was very poorly done, and the bars kept moving at the start which did not help at all

Overall, I give a 2 for effort, but these sort of movies are for Youtube, not Newgrounds

123brawltaunts123 responds:

i know..... but if you go to youtube and put it in full screen it is ALOTTTTTT better
thank you for reviewing though :)
myself i give it a seven

for your first? not bad

you at least gave the pictures enough tie to be looked at, but not missed, and they werent on for too long which was good

about the preloader, just go to http://www.newgrounds.com/downloads/p reloaders/ to download a preloader (dont get any that say flash 8 or above, they dont work on MX) after you download it just open the preloader in flash, you'll see a bunch of frames that say #instructions, just click there and you'll see what you have to do, it's not complicated

i'll make a guess, is it either the one where amy grabs soic from behind or the on with them kissing at night?

oh, if you dont like how the music doesn't stop, but starts again when the flash replays just select the frames with the song, click the small button with the triangle/arrow on it to open the tab at the bottom of the screen, click properties to open it if it isn't already open and right next to the word "sync" there is a dropdown box with the word "event", change that to "stream" and then preview your flash, it should replay but restart the song as well

the tuts can be complicating, but they do help once you get to know them

but this is very important, when you DO put in a preloader, when your about to export the movie into swf format, BE SURE to check the box marked "compress movie", that makes the filesize of the movie a lot smaller, allowing you to add a lot more pics

hope this helps!
|+|FlashMan16|+|

Mat-The-speedstar responds:

Yep, it's the one where they're kissing at night. That one just proves I blow chunks at coloring backgrounds.

I tried looking at those instructions, but I could hardly understand them. What with being 16 and having extremely little exp with Flash.

I'll try and see what I can do about adding more pics. I just hope this isn't gone by the time I finish. Art does take up a lot of time, y'know.

very good

i've never played any games with megaman or zero in them so i dont know but, zero is a guy?
it's just that the sprite looks female (i'm probably wrong)
i could use those sfx, especially the charging up one (the sound b4 rex was killed)

mind if you give me a link?

DaRkLiNk19 responds:

Thanks...Zero is a dude lol...check the NG forums for those DBZ SFX...you can't still find them then I'll send it to you via AIM or something.

know what i think?

this would make an excellent screensaver!
good movie

KobraEditing responds:

This would make a kool screen saver...thanks!

not bad actually

just make him do a lot more stuff (something stupidly funny like him suddenly riding a star through space during a music solo or something) but yea, overall not bad.

wallsandfloors responds:

If i ever make a second one, i will put a star riding scene in :D

quite good actually

it's funny,
warped to the max but still funny

what was the deal with the picture one? (the one with no sound at all) that one was just weird

VintageBro responds:

Ma ma Mee Ya, thank ya sir.

veeery nice!

I loved that first bit, that was SWEET!

Chaz-o responds:

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